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CaptainMonkeys 09-13-2008 10:10 PM

The Pirate Traitor: Play Your Part: Season One
 
A traitor acting like a pirate is murdering pirates. YOU can help find out who it is.

Chapter One - The Bulletin

Emily Sharkwash was at the bar sucking down rum. Nathaniel Foulrage was walking by the Bulletin Board in the Faithful Bride. A navy flag had been pinned on it with a message.

Quote:

Dear Meddling Pirates,
Do not mess with us Navy. You will surely die. One by one, you will fall. When one remains, I will win. My army is too big.

Sincerely,
Navy Leader
Anonmyous
"Whoah! Emily, look at this!" Nathaniel said. Emily stumbled over and asked: "Whaaat is iit?" "It's a note from the Navy. I wonder how they got the note in here without us pirates noticing. It wasn't here this morning. Carver wandered over and asked: "What's this?" "It's a note from Navy Swine." Nathaniel replied. On the ground, there was a mysterious picture. Carver picked it up. It looked like this (View bottom of screen.. cannot insert it here.) "We must find out who it is. I have a list of some suspicious characters:

Quote:

Originally posted by LIST
•Jack Ironsteel
•Hector Supercrash
•Nathaniel Truehound
•Jack Littleworths
•Ex Eggrash
•Jack Jacklestash
•Sam Supermalley
"I think we should start by looking at this list and analyzing each of these so called "pirates".

Chapter Two - Practice Day

"I think we should practice before we actually do it." Carver suggested. "How about we follow Captain Jack Sparrow around all day?" "Aye.. It might be best to do that." Exclaimed Nathaniel Foulrage. Around noon, they started following Jack. At about 3:00, Jack was back at the Faithful Bride walking around the tavern. Around 3:45 he walked up to Carver and said: "Why were those two scrap of flotsams following me around all day?" "Aye, they be trying to figger out who dat Navy Leader be, so they will be, shall we say, 'spying'?" Carver whispered. "Aye.. Emily owes me money.. she borrowed it for some rum." Jack whispered.

Chapter Three - The First Murder

"I think we should start with Jack Jacklestash. He sounds suspicious." Nathaniel exclaimed. They followed him around all day, and they learned a few things:

Jack Jacklestash
Uses cutlass alot
Likes to play Poker
Drinks Rum


"I don't think he's the traitor. Let's just keep analyzing these here pirates." Emily added. "Nathaniel, looks like that was a bad decision! We've got a bunch more to analyze... let's hope we can find the traitor soon."

That Night....

Jack Jacklestash was in his little shack on Tortuga. He was in his cot, thinking about why those two were following him. Suddenly, the door BURST open and a shadowy figure stepped inside, followed by a few Officers. Jack quickly got up, grabbed his sword, and asked, a little bit shaken: "Whooo areee youuu andddd whaaat areeee youuu doooiiing heeereee?" (Who are you and what are you doing here?) "Save your breath, pirate. There is no help around. It is night.. and it's time for you to die." said the Navy Leader in a confident voice. The leader took out his Voodoo Doll, conveniently given to him by past murders, and sucked the life right out of him with Life Drain.

Chapter Four - Eggrash Suspicion

"How about we investigate Ex Eggrash next? He sounds unpiratey." Emily suggested. "Aye, we better." Nathaniel replied. "Well, shove off then! Find out things about Eggrash!" Carver exclaimed

Nine hours later...

"We found out a little bit about him. Here's what we found:"

Ex Eggrash
Uses Doll alot
Likes to sail
Collects empty rum bottles


"I don't think he was the traitor." Nathaniel said. "Aye, me either." Emily added. "Well, we best get to sleep.. but first, how about a mug o' rum, on the house?" Carver suggested. "Aye, I could go for some rum." Nathaniel said sleepily. "Well, climb on your roof. It's on your house!" Carver laughed.

That Night...

Ex Eggrash was at a little desk in the shadowy corner of his shack. A cannonball suddenly burst through his wall! Many Veterans stepped in, swords pulled. The Navy Leader stepped in with his shadowy hat in his hand. "Hey.. you owe me for that wal..." Eggrash started to say. "Ye won't be needin' dat money. I'll just kill you instead." The leader pulled out a Dagger and Eviscerated and Viper's Nested him until he was no more.

Chapter Five - Ironsteel Ickies

"I feel that Jack Ironsteel should be the traitor." Emily suggested. Polly Pasterdine walked over. "What're ya'll doin'?" Polly asked "Searching for the traitor among pirates. There was a note a few days ago that stated about the Navy Leader murdering pirates one by one. He has been on the case of murdering all the pirates until none are leftover." Nathaniel Foulrage explained. "Aye.. we must find the traitor. How are you finding who the traitor is?" Polly asked. "We're 'stalking' each of them for the day and find out if they are it or not. I'm afraid we've had no luck. 5 days since the note was found... 5 pirates left. One of them MUST be the traitor." Emily explained. "We've been busy the past few days we haven't even had a sip of rum. Have any on ya, Polly?" Nathaniel asked. "'Fraid not.. just ran out 'tis mornin'." Polly sobbed. "We better get going. Want to come along, Polly?" Emily asked. "Nah.. tanks fer askin'. I better practice before I come with ya'll." Polly said. So, Nathaniel and Emily set off, hoping to get an addition to their team to find out more. This is what they found out:

Jack Ironsteel
Uses Dagger alot
Likes to play Blackjack
Sells rum


"I don't think he's the traitor.. let's get a good sleep before we start off tomorra'." Nathaniel said. "How about a sip o' rum first?" Emily asked. "Here, have some on the house." Carver said, handing them each a rum bottle. "Ye have done a great job. Polly could be a great addition to yer team." The three went to sleep and prepared for the next day.

That Night...

Jack Ironsteel was on Cuba, gazing at the stars from the window in his shack. Suddenly, a HUGE tornado appeared and ripped off the side of his shack. Many Officers poured in, all holding dolls confiscated from dead pirates. The familiar shadwoy figure stepped in, holding a Harrow Staff, pointed at Jack Ironsteel. "Wait a minute... your that Navy Leader that sent me to jail many years ago! Yer name was.." "Save yer breath, pirate! The only way to live is to join my Navy." "Never! I'll never join your Navy!" Jack exclaimed quickly. "Well then, I'm forced to let ye live for resisting." the Leader exclaimed. He picked him up with unknown powers of the staff gained at the impossible level 40 staff, and plunged him into the sea. "But the sharks may not be so charitable." The sharks circled Jack and tore him apart into fish tidbits.


AUTHOR'S NOTE #1: Chapter 4 - Sorry all ye pirates, we have yet to find the Navy Traitor. Continue to vote and analyze each pirate! If we get down to one pirate left and it's the leader, he wins. If we get the leader before all the suspicious pirates are murdered, we win. Also, you might notice that it says Season One. This story will continue with a Season Two! New suspicions, new storyline. If you want to be included in the next season, please post here.

AUTHOR'S NOTE #2: Chapter 5 - That last line is familiar from the Leader, huh? 4 pirates left, so make each vote count! Special thanks to Chris, OfxZeppers and PirateMarioJr for participating alot! Votes reset, four pirates, let's see what'll happen next!

**END**

NOW, Here's YOUR part of the story. Vote who you think these pirates should inspect first. Here's the list so far of those still remaining:

•Jack Ironsteel (3 votes) with DAVY JONES
•Hector Supercrash (0 votes)
•Nathaniel Truehound (2 vote)
•Jack Littleworths (1 votes)
•Ex Eggrash (2 votes) with DAVY JONES
•Jack Jacklestash (4 votes) with DAVY JONES
•Sam Supermalley (0 votes)

Now, do not let the acts deceive you. You will find out EACH chapter who will get voted off the votes. Now, who is first?

Please note: All of the pirates listed look like the picture.:piratear:

Next chapter: See who will get analyzed/murdered!

PirateMarioJr 09-15-2008 12:36 AM

Do we PM you our vote?

CaptainMonkeys 09-15-2008 01:04 AM

No, just post it.

Chris 09-15-2008 02:26 AM

:o interesting MORE MORE!!!!! lol

CaptainMonkeys 09-15-2008 08:08 PM

I need votes for a new chapter.. I'll post the non-voted chapter two right now. PLEASE post votes here, or we can't get anyone analyzed.

Captain Del 09-15-2008 10:47 PM

I vote for Ex Eggrash. He has a cool name :D

Dr. Zeppers 09-15-2008 10:50 PM

Jack Jacklestash


Hes got something to hide (ie some information stashed away).

Chris 09-15-2008 11:56 PM

Jack Jacklestash seems really suspisious seems like a fake pirate name to me!

PirateMarioJr 09-16-2008 12:30 AM

yeah, I vote for Jack Jacklestash too

Captain Del 09-16-2008 12:34 AM

Why I am i always the one who is different?

GO TEAM EX EGGRASH!!!!!!

Mr.LoveLocket 09-16-2008 12:52 AM

EX Eggrash

AdmiralSavvy 09-16-2008 12:54 AM

I'm going to vote for Ex Eggrash.

Mr.LoveLocket 09-16-2008 12:55 AM

This story rocks! :] you should add next chapter real soon

Rackat 09-16-2008 05:39 PM

Jack Jacklestash

CaptainMonkeys 09-16-2008 11:43 PM

Tallying votes... ADDING NEW CHAPTER! Be careful pirates, you may just be getting rid of another pirate!


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