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Old 05-05-2009, 12:26 AM
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Cale couldn't fix his crazy computer.

After much work and wasted money a sinister thought came to him.

His conscience told him no.

But when a very vicious virus came into his computer he couldn't stand it.


There was no hope for bods computer and the evil thought came back to him.

He would steal his neighboors 1,000,000GB computer. The evil plot began.

At the house he found the precious treasure he was looking for. It was right there, all for him. While unplugging the computer he tricked the security system.

But he was smarter than the computer. A thought came to him and while unplugging the computer he let the computer throw a punch at him. Cale jumped and grabbed the arm and pulled it out. The security system was down.

Or so he thought...

Cale heard the police outside and knew he had to go on a rampage to escape.
That didn't stop the police and they just waved their fingers at him.

Cale had to escape, but how. He bashed his head against the wall.

He, being the foolish brute that he was, made a run for it.

That didn't stop those cops. The catched up to him and gave him the ol', "You have the right to remain silent..."
In the back of the car the soap box rattled.


Off to jail he went, with twenty....months...to a year.


Not my best but I wanted to add in words.

EDIT: Are we allowed to edit our stories before this ends? Can we also put words in it?

Last edited by MacIronhawk; 05-27-2009 at 09:58 PM..