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It's good, but I would take your comments after each piece. It is making it sound like a TV newscast and it might distract the readers from the work each one of you guys is doing.
I would also go through the image posting guide to post your logo on Top.
On DK's news separate them in small paragraphs. That whole part seems like its only one news item.
The bolds that begins each item I would center it. This will let your readers know that a new part is starting.
Other than that and typos you guys are off to a good start. Keep it up!
Edit: I thought Zeke was The Commodore not The Commander.
Last edited by The Skirata Clan; 01-05-2010 at 04:45 AM..
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