[Johnny Storm]

This is the story that I made for my new pirate Dante, please take a look at it and tell me what you think.

I am Dante, a famous pirate who was feared by many. I sailed across the caribbean with my captain and fellow crew mates. As time passed I became feared across the Caribbean and hated by the EITC and Royal Navy. As my skills became more powerful I became more powerful than my captain. He also began to hate me and out of jealousy ordered my crew mates to battle me and throw me into the valcano at Padres Del Fuego. They did so and I fell in battle and was then tossed into the valcano, I thought this was my fate.

But a evil stood by in the shadows and watched as I was thrown into the valcano. This was none other than Jolly Roger looking for pirates to force into his evil army of the undead. He used his evil voodoo magic to turn me into one of his undead monsters. I had lost all of my free will and was forced to fight as one of the undead. As time passed many came to fear me even more when I was not undead. This fate I had been given was too harsh, even for a pirate.

During an invasion on tortuga I ran into one of my best friends in my former pirate life. She was a gypsy who was very powerful. She knew who I was and then said, Dante, what has that evil skeleton done to you!? She knew I had lost my free will and being very smart she used her voodoo powers to somewhat free me from my curse. I had gained my free will but was still a undead wraith. I then knew what I had to do, I must defeat Jolly to regain my honor and end his evil endevours to conquer the caribbean.

The invasion of tortuga was a loss and Jolly retreated to his hidden pirate lair. Weakend by the invasion Jolly was in no condition for battle, but he was still a deadly enemy. I aproched him and said, You evil monster, you shall never destroy us pirates!!! We then began to battle, he was weak, but still possesed many of his dark powers. I was nearly deafeated but I managed to bearly win. I was not able to defeat the evil skeleton but had weakend him greatly before I was forced to run away. Free of Jolly Roger's hold on my free will I wanderd the seas, still hated by my pirate brethren for being undead until one day I came across a mysterious women who had pity on me. She said, Poor undead soul, you have battled Jolly but are still cursed to be undead, you remind me of Davy Jones. This women was none other than Tia Dalma, she then picked up a voodoo staff and summoned powerful voodoo magic, returning me into my human form. She suddenly dissapeard. Finally free of the curse I returned to being a pirate, now more feared by the undead monsters than ever.