Kat.. I know I've said this before, but this is truly an amazing story. Its captivating, exciting, and well written. I couldn't stop smiling at the scenes with Lawrence. I always love watching the beginnings of a relationship. The little details are what really leave an impression on the reader, and you've played on that perfectly. The story has a nice flow to it too. I can't wait to read your next chapter! All I can say is Bravo Kat! You have a talent for writing.. No doubt about it.