Nice job Keeper! As Crest said, the way you use an onomatopoeia to describe what is happening shows some
incredible writing skills. It was kind of confusing though, such as this part right here.
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Originally Posted by KeeperOfTheCode
Another released from Jolly Roger's spell.
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He is on the ship, right? Why would there be a skeleton on his ship? I am confused. Help me out a little please?
Can't wait for the next one mate. Looking forward to it!