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I think that this is a great conclusion to this story. Everything sort of comes together and is explained (but it still took me a few readings to fully understand it, and even then, I probably don't still.) The psychology that you put in this story has made it all the more interesting and intense. What's more, the way you describe the images that are purely in the captain's mind is astounding. The way the captain just kind of recovered at the very end was perhaps a bit too sudden, but it all works, and it all comes together. Great job Keeper. Can't wait to see what else you can come up with.
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