OHHHHHH, Kat....what I wouldn't give to be a fly on a wall in your garage!!!
Seriously...hmmm...nah....can't do serious well, who am I fooling

, you have outdone yourself on these last two.
Introducing your brothers character, Hector, gives Kat that little compassionate, protective, softer edge....while still proving her mettle against any villain she meets! You have to be his hero,,,,heck,,,,you are my hero and we aren't even related!!
I am glad you didn't wait on the Hallows Eve one!...Talk about a surprise chapter!! Excellent detail Crest!! And yes, the flow is better...so thanks Juliana....good team work...hardest part is waiting to see how Lawrence is gonna make it up to Kat for trying to 'debone' her...lol