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Ok, ok, finally made it. Sorry it took so long! Now, about this chapter...
I like the description of the battle and the twist where you are immune to his voodoo. The way you made the chain reaction with the Kegs was smart. When Jolly leaves, it's very foreboding, which is good. It keeps me interested. It was kind of amusing how you didn't see the bullet on the ground right next to the gun, haha. A little humor in the middle of serious. A few grammar errors, but nothing big. Nice job mate!
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