That poor, poor boy child....I'm kinda hoping you make this an epic...so I can see him as a young man, as he surely will turn out well for having had known Kat !!
I disagree about an inevitable ending...Lawrence joining Kat ? anything could happen...he could get bit by a tste fly and lie in a coma for a year...ok thats soap operas,,,sorry...
anyways, I read these last two together...and yes, theres a lil difference in detail work...but darn good for having writers block...more please!!