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I want to say thanks for the reviews that I got. And here is the next chapter.
I Present:
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*Transition*
Pirate J had left the pub a little disappointed. He had to wipe away a tear when he thought of all his goofy smiles or silly remarks when he was near Rachel. He was Four at the time Rachel was born. They were the best of friends and have been ever since.
J strode towards his house near the faithful bride. Suddenly, his ears pricked up. He heard a scream. He knew it was Rachel's... He ran as fast as lightning towards her location.
Rachel sat there dazed as if she was hit on the head with a club.
There was a thin film in the air when J reached the bog. He searched the dense jungle-like plants and killed every skeleton that crossed his path. He was determined to find her.
Then he spotted her sitting on the porch of Jack Redrat's house.
"Rachel, what happened?"
"I don't know J, I just don't know...
Pirate J was confused and scared. He didn't know what had happened. His only guess was the interior of the house. The Door opened with a creak that would scare the bones off of a skeleton.
Wait Jack, don't go in there!"
"I'll do what I must Rachel..."
J was stopped in his tracks. There was a dead body in the middle of the floor. He analyzed the body. It wasn't hard to find the cause of death. He had a giant gash in his his stomach.
Now the mood was tense. The bog was infested with skeletons. And too make it worse, a EITC Corporal was in town inspecting an operation run by his men.
"Rachel, we must get out of here"
"What shall we do with Jack?"
"We bury Redrat. Rachel, get your stuff ready, we are leaving tomorrow."
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