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Here is an edit to my old one. I gave it a title as well.
Ol' Venom Lash
Venture into the Wildwoods,
Many scorpions ye shall see.
Some pirates will start shootin'!
The wise ones will flee.
If ye are not wise,
And you choose to kill,
Don't shoot Ol' Venom Lash,
He be the king of the hill!
When the scorpions see their leader dead,
The killer they will need to shred.
The monsters will find you, you cannot run!
For your legs will feel like lead.
The first time they shall let you escape,
But only to prolong your death.
Every time ye leave your house,
They will attack you, before you can even take a breath.
For a year this Torture shall go on,
Until you cannot take any more!
But just when you finally think they are gone...
You will see more scorpions than ever before!
Every follower of Ol' Venom Lash
Will run to attack you in a crazy mad dash.
Ye wont be able to defend yerself, as bystanders run for their lives!
Before the horrible scorpions devour you alive.
So never be messin' with Ol' Venom Lash....
May that curse make your blood run cold!!!
Last edited by Tiberius Fireskull; 09-23-2010 at 01:14 AM..
Reason: added the last line of the curse.
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