Davy, I must say, you are a fantastic writer. I'm sorry I haven't been following this story closer, because it is truly amazing. You have taken the world of POTCO and made it your own, making it seem like I'm not just reading the story of a player in the game, but of an actual pirate and his actual struggles, which just so happens to be in the same place as the game. You've taken Davy (well, you I suppose) and made him into a believable character, with flaws and strengths, along with all of the other characters you have here. I'll have to put this on alert now so I can keep up.
Well done mate.