wow, really!?
Thank you all so much for your replies! I shall write up another chapter right now, just for you

. I have some spare time, so it should be up soon. I will carry it on from the first first chapter lol, i.e from 'she was sure she felt him straighten.'
I think I'm going to have Women Who Behave as the first chapter, then switch it to And so she drunk as the second. So it gives you a background on Anne's life, then switches to flashback as the rest of the story, so we travel through each moment as it happens. EEP!
Thanks so much for your replies, I will write another one now =).