You did horrible. You should never write again. Never in my life have I read such an atrocious story.
Guess what? IT'S OPPOSITE DAY!
Wunderbar, Chris! That was sad when they died, but hey, what's a good pirate story without a few good people dying?
I love how you're including PNC peoples, too. :] Char is pretty awesome. I wonder if she's in the guild... I don't think I've met her.
Re-post ASAP! ^^