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Old 03-18-2011, 01:36 AM
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Thanks for the feedback guys! I actually started this because a friend asked me to.. I guess now I have to continue "thinking"... Soooo.. uh.. Yeah..

Rebirth

Edward’s was mind twisted by The Darkness, and as he was being pulled from the water he could hear a demonic laugh. The Mask brought Edward to a nearby home, far away from any bodies of water.

He was awoken by the sound of a gunshot. “Who are you?” said an enormous man from the shadows. Another gunshot. “I’ll ask you one last time before I put you to rest… WHO are you?” Edward jumped to his feet and tried to remember what happened “Sir, I’m afraid I don’t know”

“Don’t know yer name?” the man lowered his gun and walked towards him to inspect him. “Looks like yer clothes are soaked. Where’ve you been?” said the man with pity. “I can’t remember for the life of me sir.”

“Well, wouldn’t feel right sendin’ ye off like this.”
“I got some extra clothes that might fit ya inside the house, and you can rest here if you like.”

“That’s a fine sword you have there mate. Were you a pirate?” The man pointed to the cutlass at his side. “Let me have a look at that.” He examined the cutlass and noticed the word ‘Deadpool’ inscribed on it. “I think I figured yer name out, have a look.” He handed him back the sword “Kinda strange, but it’s yer name mate.”

“Now that I know yer name, I might as well tell you mine, name’s Phil.” Phil brought him inside quietly, so he wouldn't wake his family, and gave him some clean clothes. “These were my sons. See if they fit ya.” Phil handed Deadpool the clothes and sent him to changed.

As Deadpool changed clothes, visions ran through his mind. He saw bandits charging into the home torturing him and Phil, and killing Phil’s family then having a drink over their bodies and burning the house down. Deadpool fell over in horror, and suddenly heard noises outside. He looked outside and could see a group of men advancing towards the house. He quickly got dress ran to warn Phil.

“Ye saw what? Calm down mate, I’m sure it’s nothing to worry about.”

“I TOLD you it’s true! I cannot explain it, but I had a vision, and you and your family are in danger Phil!” Deadpool walked back and forth in frenzy. “We have to get out of here now!” Deadpool peaked out of the window to search for the bandits, but they were gone.

“I... I... just saw them a minute ago!” Deadpool stuck his head out of the window, but was pulled back in by Phil. “Enough of this, who knows what you’ve been through, a good night sle--“ The sound of broken glass filled the house. “Daddy!!” a panicked young boy called from upstairs. Deadpool and Phil raced upstairs and were shocked at the sight.

Upstairs stood the group of bandits Deadpool foresaw. One of them had Phil’s youngest son held hostage, and his wife had been knocked to the floor. “Don’t come any closer,” said one of them with a knife in hand.