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I am five years older than you and you shall treat me with respect or you shall suffer by the wrath of my arsenal of dolls!
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I giggled. ._.
Excellent chapter, Chris!
I think you're hitting the character's personalities really well. I agree with the voodoo, too. You made it 10x scarier than it's portrayed in the game (although for obvious reasons). Nonetheless, it was very effective on the chapter.
Well done.