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He rub his hands up and down his body, to try and gather some warmth,
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I do believe that should be "He
rubbed his hands. With that grammar mistake, I hate this chapter.
Lol, I kid. Very good. Not much to say, but I really like Commodore Rutherford. An interesting character he is... so is John of course, but Rutherford is an interesting one... I can't wait to see what he does with John next.