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Old 04-08-2012, 09:41 PM
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Chapter 11: The Power of Light

Bart growled in rage. "You can't beat me! I am unstoppable! The master of darkness!" Gastro slashed Bart. "I honestly don't care what happens to this world. After all, it was your creation to try to take over all worlds so I'll let it die."

Bart widened his eyes and said, "What do you mean?" Gastro smirked. "Don't you see? The amount of power we've been using to fight in this world is enormous. It's making your world split in half. It will soon be destroyed completely and your hard work will be gone."

Bart pounded his fists on the ground. "NO!! THIS CAN'T BE!! MY PLANS WERE SO PERFECT!! I DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW THEY COULD HAVE FAILED LIKE THIS!!"

Jack plunged his blade into the ground in front of Bart. "Simple. Darkness never wins and you didn't think out your plans right. Didn't you know that we had gotten stronger? You, of all people, should have anticipated that. And one more reason you failed. You've gotten weaker both in mind and in strength."

Bart, still shaking, got back up. "Well, my plans haven't entirely failed yet. If this world is destroyed, so are you. That, and I'm still alive. And..." He balled his fists and a dark aura appeared around him along with dark arms emerging from the ground! "...I'll use the last of my dark powers to destroy you pitiful fools and bring darkness to power!"

The dark arms grabbed Jack's father! Jack held out his hand. "Father!!!" Michael sneaked up behind Bart and cut off the dark arm holding Jack and Michael's father. Bart turned around and said, "Fool!!"

He held out his dark arms and gripped Michael on his neck! As Michael choked for air, Jack's anger began to rise. Finally, he took one last glance and ran towards Bart saying, "No!!! Stop!!!" His light aura shined brighter and his helmet's mask closed over him.

Bart turned around and said, "Wha--" But, he couldn't finish because Jack had just struck Bart with his blade. As Bart fell down, the dark arms released Michael. He dropped to the ground, gasping for air.

Del walked towards Jack and said, "Jack, we can end this now. I know a chant that can help us win for sure." Jack turned around and said, "You do?" Del replied, "Yes, but you must repeat after me." Jack nodded and waited.

"Hag manoa, lunde polami, remowa, astropicus lighta!" chanted Del. Jack repeated, "Hag manoa, lunde polami, remowa, astropicus lighta!" Jack's blade shined a bright yellow and the light shot at Del, Gastro, Mark, Sparrow, and Michael.

"What's happening?" said Gastro as he rose into the air, shining yellow like the other Bladebearers. Del replied, "Jack is sharing some of his light with you, turning us all into Super Bladebearers for a brief time." Bart looked up and said, "No! I can't believe it! 6 Super Bladebearers at once?!"

Del shouted, "Bart, your time has come! Prepare to meet your end!" as all of the Bladebearers charged at Bart. The force sent him flying into the core and he was destroyed!

Everyone cheered in happiness and the Bladebearers turned back to normal except for Jack. "Why didn't you tell me the chant before?" asked Jack. "We could have defeated him before all of this chaos!" Del replied, "Because it can only be used when we are facing a dark enemy when he is at full power."

Gastro turned to Michael. "Do you still remember how to get out? This world will end soon." Michael replied, "Of course. Only now, I can use a light portal." Mark said, "Dude, you've gotta teach me how to do that."

As everyone was walking away, they heard the sound of something. It sounded like huffing and growling. Jack widened his eyes in hope that it wasn't what he thought it was. Alas, nothing can be too good to be true.

He turned around and saw a near death Bart standing in front of the core! "Surprise!!" said Bart as everyone gaped in horror at what was standing before them.