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Old 08-17-2010, 04:32 AM
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The Lost Tale

Ok so I got bored (like always) so I decided to make a new story.




Note: this was made on my phone, give me some props for that xD


CHAPTER ONE

Once upon a time, there was a child named Jack.

This child wasn't especially bright, nor did he have many friends.

He was the son of a well-known, famous, and rich blacksmith. His father had created some of the most elagent, beautiful, well balanced, swords and daggers the Caribbean has even seen, as well as some the Caribbean hasn't seen...

Because of this the child had been vigorously forced and taught how to wield a sword. Nevertheless the child was the best swordsman in the place he grew up in, which is unknown, as well as his last name.

15 years later he had taken over the family buisness and became he new most well-known, famous, rich , blacksmith of his village, however he wasn't known for creating the best swords and daggers the carribean has ever seen, he was known for creating the most powerful. He had created such weapons as the Bloodfire weapons, Darkfire cutlass, and also some unknown ones such as Shadowfire cutlass. His most prized possession. With all these "fire" weapons he soon received the nickname "Jack Firesteel"

However there are just as many consequences as there are rewards with creating powerful voodoo weapons. Over time he had gotten some.. Not-so-liked people. Pirates, And Undead. Jolly Roger specifically. He did not have anything against pirates, but he did have something against Jolly Roger. He had killed his father, his mother, and his sister.

The only reason he had agreed to sell Roger his weapons, was because he was afraid to his own life, because you see, Roger had threatened to kill him, raise him from the dead, and make him kill everyone in his village.

One day the usual Undead pirate came to buy the usual weapons. As he does every month. But this time Roger didn't send the Undead to buy weapons, but to take them.

When the Undead pirate arrived Jack had already had the weapons ready for him, but once the Undead opened the door he immediately bashed Jack over the head with the butt of his sword and then he took every weapon in the store, except for one. The Shadowfire Cutlass. Which was resting safely inside the wall in a secret compartment.

When Jack woke up, his shop was trashed and all his weapons gone. He quickly got up and checked the secret compartment to check if his Cutlass was there. He then took it and ran ou the door to see if the Undead was there but he was long gone. His cutlass lit on fire with a black flame and began to grow with Jacks growing rage. He wanted to destroy Jolly Roger for killer and taking everything he owned. He needed a crew. He had to become a pirate.

He went to the nearest tavern, knowing many crew masters and pirates would be there.

As he entered he was shocked to see that the tavern was empty. All except for a man in a coat, sitting at the farthest table. He had a hat, a beard, tatoos around his face, and on the table, laid a cutlass in it's sheathe.

He walked over to his table and sat down.
"Your a pirate aren't you?" Asked Jack.
"What of it?" replied the stranger.
"Nothing! I'm just looking for a crew. Your a crewmaster right?" asked Jack.
"Aye. I do have a crew. And we are recruiting.... Why do you need one...?"
"I want to destroy Jolly Roger for kill.."
"Don't we all." interrupted the stranger.
"..for killing my family, and taking everything I own." said Jack.
"We all have sob stories mate. What makes you so special?" snapped the stranger.
"Your recruiting right? You need me."
"No we don't need you. We just want more crewmates. If we needed you, do you think I would be sitting here, while my crewmates look for the Lost Sword of El Patron? No. I would be looking for you. But I'm not. You found me." he said.
"Ok. I'm just going to ask then. Can I join your crew?" asked Jack.
"That would be great. Me name is Delmaria Darkskull. You?"
"people call me Jack Firesteel. I am a blacksmith. I am known for creating some very powerful weapons. I created the Bloodfire weapons."
Dels eyes widened
"So your skilled with the cutlass? We could use you. Tomorrow morning. The dock. 5 o'clock. Don't be late."

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Old 08-17-2010, 07:28 AM
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I thought it was story involving LOST!!

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Old 08-17-2010, 03:25 PM
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Dude... Lost is so creepy xD
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Old 08-17-2010, 03:39 PM
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Dude... Lost is so creepy xD
Creepy in a good or bad way? xD Nice story Jacko...
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Old 08-17-2010, 04:15 PM
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Old 12-20-2010, 08:21 AM
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Yeah so I realize it took me a gizzilion years to actually start the next chapter, but I have had a lot of *shrudder* school recently and I haven't been able to get to it. Now its christmas break and I has the free times.

Note: Read at your own risk, this can get violent.

Chapter 2

As Jack gets out of bed, he realizes that he overslept, so he sprints out the door, cutlass in hand, and runs to the dock.
"Yer late Jack." says Darkskull.
"I'm sorry, I over slept." replies Jack.
"I didn't ask you for an excuse. I was making sure you knew. Now get on the ship" barks Darkskull.
"Yes sir... wait, which one?" asks Jack.
"You know, normal crew members don't ask this many questions. It be the war sloop over there. The one with the name "Victory Shark" on it." replies Darkskull.
Jack walks to the ship and climbs aboard slowly, peering on the decks. When he gets on the main deck, someone taps his shoulder.
"What do you think your doing on our ship?" asks a stranger.
"Its OK Will, hes a new recruit." says Darkskull.
"How on earth did he get onboard so fast?" thinks Jack.
"Oh.. ok. Whats yer name then son? asks Will.
"Jack Firesteel. Whats your name?" asks Jack.
"William Goldwalker" replies Will.
"Let me introduce you to the rest of the crew, Jack." says Darkskull. "Crew mates! Report to the main deck, now!"
As each and every crew member runs to the main deck, Jack gets more and more excited. Then the last pirate files in and Delmaria starts introducing them to Jack. He introduced Andrew, William Goldwalker, Grace Goldgull, Charles Crestshot, the Pirate of Wisdom, and up to this day Jack still doesn't know his real name, Buck Bankok, and Elizabeth McMorgan.
"Now, go to your stations! We leave port in 5 minutes!" yells Darkskull.
"Where are we going?" asks Jack.
"To find the Lost Sword of El Patron, and maybe along the way Jolly will appear so you can get a whack at him." replies Darkskull.
"Good, because i'll never forget what he did." snarls Jack.

Two months at sea, and the crew of the Victory Shark stop at their first port. Padres Del Fuego. Delmaria send a couple of pirates to go get some supplies, and some to repair the ship. Then he takes the rest of the crew, including Jack to go do some looting.
"Where are we going?" asks Jack.
"You use that question to much Jacky. We are going to Becketts Quarry. We are going to see what Neban has." says Darkskull.
"Who's Neban...?" asks Jack.
"A skilled swordsman. Thats all you need to know."
When the crew gets to the entrance of the cave, Del tells the crew to stay quiet and to avoid any guards. Then they go in.
As they are going through the first major cave, with 3 guards, the crew goes as quietly as they can, but Jack accidentally kicks a rock, and the guards were on him faster then he could blink. Jack, unsheathes his Shadowfire and it immediately starts to blaze a black fire. As the guards blink and stare at the fire, Del tells the crew to hide behind a nearby rock and watch. Then Jack, wondering why they aren't helping, slashes at the first guards neck, killing him instantly, and the black flames engulfed his body, disintegrating it in a matter of seconds. The other two guards, realizing he was an impostor, start slashing at him, but Jack, being the masterful swordsman that he is, easily parries and blocks the attacks and stabs the second guard. The third guard, after staring at his burning comrade, lashes at Jack, but he easily dodges and kills the third guard. The flames from his sword destroy any signs of any guards even being there.
"Why didn't you help?" asks Jack.
"Hey you were the one who kicked the rock, next time be more careful!" barks Darkskull as loudly as he can, but still whispering.

As the crew makes their way to Neban's cave, Del tells some of the crew to heal with voodoo, some to throw daggers, and the remaining two, Del and Jack, to use cutlass.

Then the crew strikes. After a couple seconds, most of the crew is reviving, or needs to be revived. All the pirates that are left, are Jack and Del. Then Neban throws a poison dagger at Del, hitting square in the chest. Luckily, Charles was there to help. Jack then charges at Neban with a flaming sword. Neban jumps out of the way, and throws several daggers at him but misses, then Will comes in and showers Neban with a barrage of spells from his staff, but Neban manages to strike down Will. Then, with Neban distracted, Jack charges again, but this time he hits Neban.

After everyone in the crew had recovered, Del opened the loot chest, but found nothing but junk.

"Ugh, nothing. We have to go to Darkhart." says Darkskull.
Then, as he said that a group of assassins ran into the cave, swords in hand, ready to kill.




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