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05-21-2010, 03:08 AM
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I love how you keep putting off the obvious romantic interest here. It definitely keeps me reading. I love how those little moments you go, 'They are sooo gonna finally say something right now!' and then they do the opposite and (as kat did) kind of shove off the feeling for now. It's torturous but effective. It will build the relationship much nicer this way. Keep up the good work Kat! I'm LOVING it!!!!
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