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I can feel the suspense and tension ever building, Crest. This is the reason why everybody is so anxious for the next chapter - your story is very open ended, suspenseful, and of all things, intent and gripping. I really am waiting to see you release all your potential in to what you have in store, which I know will be more than enough to stun and shock - more than usual, of course
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