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Her Beginning
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04-17-2010, 12:24 PM
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That was amazing! I could never write that well, I'm not very good at making details
 I do like how you get the littlest of details in which I think makes it much more interesting.
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04-17-2010, 04:01 PM
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way to go
thats so cool ur great at this!
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04-22-2010, 07:57 PM
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I really enjoyed that chapter. You have a great skill at writing.
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