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Thank you for the review on the first chapter, as we know I am getting into a load of trouble, either door a or door b. Want to know what happens next? Just read on.
Chapter 2 A Lost Wish Two sides of fate tempting me.... one way to go. I had no idea what to do yet so I decided to continue going on with this debt to pay back until I was sure I could keep going or head back. As I stride outside the cemetery I see a navy cadet. The navy cadet starts slashing at me while I walk by. I start to parry and lunge, thrusting and hacking and then I got the finishing blow. He fell backwards and his face turned pale. I felt nothing, they did this to my father and I will do it back to them. I found the release orders and then I was to head to the Governor's Mansion. It was guarded by cadets which I found amusing because of how easy they were to defeat. One by one I went into a fury rage until every cadet was gone, and on the ground pale. I unsheathed my sword and went inside the Mansion. She said that I must find Jack Sparrow, and that she is awaiting her father's return. She would not join me. I was told to see Darby Drydocks in order to get a ship. As I'm walking by the gypsy cart I see a potion table. I wondered if I should make any. I asked the gypsy, Lucinda if I should and she said that there was something in me. Try a few potions and see if the fates will let you master. As I throw in ingredients into my bowl I make a potion, the swashbuckler stew I. This increases your sword attack said Lucinda. I said thank you and left to go to Darby Drydock's. As I head over there I almost fell on the ground, there on the shore was my father's ship but in devasting state, as I run over and ask Darby on how that ship came, he said that it was in bad shape when it landed onto shore here. He would fix it later. I then said ' Is there anyway to fix it quicker? " Then he mentioned something about repairing it by hitting some nails, plugging leaks and getting water out of there. I then boarded my ship and did what I was told, in about an hour it was freshly repaired waiting to be sailed. As I walk into my cabin to take a good night's sleep I see a note out of the tip of my eye. Dear son, If you ever see this note, then it means that I have passed away. I wish you with this ship. Also, I wish that you get revenge on the EITC ship that has killed me. Get revenge on every last one of them for my last wish. Love, Father As I stared at it I had no idea what happened. I keep reading it over and yet I still did not know what to do. Was I going to risk my life in order to fulfill my father's wishes. Or was I going to try to make a good living at Port Royal with a home. I still did not know. I went to sleep thinking...... __________________________________________________ __________________________________ Ok that's Chapter Two, a lost wish. Any review are apperciated and don't be afraid to criticize! |
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