The Pirate Life Begins...

[Crestshot]

I agree mate, very exciting. The detail was very good and I liked the way you described the fighting. It's interesting how you brought the Muertos moon into this too. Also, it's amusing how you got to Tortuga first, haha.

However, there was this one point at the beginning that kind of confused me.

How could I be so careless as to not set the sails strapped?

It seems kind of odd and awkward. I got what you were saying, but maybe go back and edit it a little.