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07-26-2010, 04:45 PM

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Very good story, good detail. But I'd like to see more of a surrounding details part. Like there were trees in the distance, islands off in the far directions wherever you looked, the sand was dry, with a hint of gravel in it.

Something similiar like that. It makes the scene more realistic.

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