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09-03-2010, 10:42 PM
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Erm... A beautifully written chapter, but it really helps is you know what you're talking about. When you said front mast, you could have said fore-mast. Then of course, there's the main-mast, and finally, in the back, the mizzen-mast. Things like that really liven up a chapter. If you ever need help with that, just ask.
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