I require everyone's help or if not some people's help... :)

[titanic95594]

My advice you may already know but we all like different genres of stories so its good to make a poll of what genres of what people like on the forums. Adjectives like bang, boom, etc. But nothing with "rice cake words" as I call them what means words that are commonly used. Maybe put in the story like of the fog in the beginning of the story and your unable to dock. Realism is the key so add things that exist in the game and all. Hope this helps .