Those Condemned to Freedom

[Crestshot]

Del... I absolutely love this story. You have amazing detail, imagery, and honestly, the length of the chapters only add to it. What really comes out to me in this, though, is the tone. You create a world that is the POCTO we know, but at the same time, you have created it your own. I can feel and relate to the characters, even though I have never been put in a position remotely like theirs. You make my gut clench in fear when you're boarding the ship of the line, and make me laugh when Del doesn't like the elixir Jack gives him. That is what really makes this story. Well done mate.

[pieisbetter2]

Wow... just... WOW. If I could find a more beautifully written story, well I don't think I could lol. The way you add all the little details as to what is going on and how it happens and where you are is ridiculously amazing. Keep up the awesomeness man!