Those Condemned to Freedom

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You... you.... my god, you killed Andrea! Just... just... wow Del. Just Wow.

You are such an incredible author. You've kept me interested from the very beginning of this chapter, and all the way down to the last word. I'll admit, you have a rather dark story, but you do it so well! You do it in a way that brings the reader in, not makes them turn away because they can't stand to see what happens next (or, as I like to call them, Cringe Moments (which is also known as the entire show of Hannah Montana)). You take this new place Disney has granted us and turned it into your own, making it far more fearful than Raven's Cove originally was when it came out. This story is like an adrenaline rush for me, I get so into it. The imagery is incredible, only enticing me more. As hard as it was to read the death of Andrea... I loved it. Del... bottom line is, well done, as always mate.