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12-02-2010, 04:12 PM
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Crest, everytime I read your chapters, they make me smile.... Keep it up!
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12-02-2010, 09:35 PM
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I seriously love how you have developed each character to be individuals
Each one is so strong & it shows how much you have put yourself into each of them (excuse the cheesiness here) It is magic how you write their discovery of their special talents & skills It really pulls the readers in & builds a bond with the characters  How I can't wait to read more, & yet dread it because it brings me that much closer to the final chaptersKeep up the excellent writing!  |
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12-02-2010, 11:15 PM
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I just read all the chapters.
In the chapters on page 6, guess what ran through my mind? "In real life, she'd have pitched him." "Pitching... and mooning?" True Anne of Green Gables will recognize the reference, haha. I'm absolutely loving the story. I'll definitely keep reading it. Last edited by Catherine Ironcutter; 12-03-2010 at 01:35 AM.. |
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