The Scathed

[Captain Del]

I can feel the suspense and tension ever building, Crest. This is the reason why everybody is so anxious for the next chapter - your story is very open ended, suspenseful, and of all things, intent and gripping. I really am waiting to see you release all your potential in to what you have in store, which I know will be more than enough to stun and shock - more than usual, of course

[Catherine Ironcutter]

Loved the chapter, now I shall sit and lurk until later this week, when you post the next chapter