The firow stories

[Mr. Skiperdoo]

Originally Posted by finn

I'm sure u have all noticed how my story has no dialog well dialog doesnt make a good story dialog is a great add on and i am going to have dialog to make this better but there has been barly 2 chances for that

Grammar mistakes aside, my best advice for you would be to write the story in your own style. Creating new and innovative ideas can be a great way to make a story that's different.

Just remember to make them a little longer.

[finn]

Originally Posted by Mr. Skiperdoo

Grammar mistakes aside, my best advice for you would be to write the story in your own style. Creating new and innovative ideas can be a great way to make a story that's different.

Just remember to make them a little longer.

thank you i will be updating every day and if i miss a day i will make a longer part the next time

but again thank u for your advice