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07-25-2011, 01:14 AM

Mr. Skiperdoo Mr. Skiperdoo is offline

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Pretty nice story you got here. Great in both length and dialouge.

However you shouldn't have everything bunched up like that. If you want to figure out what I mean, go look at some of the other stories and see what they look like.

Another thing OW MY EYES!

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