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Finally caught up. Very good Del. Your writing style is very mature, with a good mixture of intense fighting and slower explanation scenes. And I can see some things starting to come out of it, especially the tattoo.
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Captain Del, I have to say you are a very talented writer! Your story drew me in from the first page and I read every chapter! It was if I had a good book in me hand and couldn't put it down. I am definitely a fan and will look for your previous stories. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
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