James Irontack: The Series

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Prologue:
One day in the Spanish Main, there was a teenage boy named James Ironstack. He was the first son of Sir Henry Morgan. James' mom has died many years ago but not before his dad had left. There was now no parent. Only James and his brothers and sister. Him and his brothers and sisters had to change there last name to Ironstack so the Spanish wouldn't attack the beloved and poor family.James was 18, his younger sister, Elizabeth, was 14. Then there was the young twins, Jordan and Marc they were only 8. The family had a living in a small alleyway in Port Royal were there father had left them. They were poor. The only protection they had was a little hut. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________________________
That is my new story's prologue.
(This story has SOME true information and people. Maybe a little history too!)

James Ironstack Tales: The First Voyage
Chapter 1: First Encounter
One day, James woke up. He then woke up his other siblings by slamming there bag of 40 gold coins on the wall of the small hut. Everyone woke up. James started to talk about the Royal Navy. Elizabeth thought that James was making up words even though he really wasn't. They all heard a deep voice coming from the wall across the bridge. James then got a rusted shovel and walked slowly across the bridge that was about two feet away from the alleyway. He saw a pirate and... WAM! That hit the pirate. The pirate then pulled his sword out to James and sliced wildly but James blocked the blade of the sword with the shovel. James yelled to his younger siblings to run but instead only Marc and Jordan only ran, Elizabeth was coming at the pirate! Elizabeth rolled past the pirate, pulled out the pirates pistol out of his pistol holder and shot! The pirate fell to his knees as he died. James was totally stunned because of what Elizabeth had just done. Elizabeth said, " James, you get the sword. I will keep the pistol. " as she was searching through the pirates clothes and loot pouch looking for some gold. She found some, and counted. She then saw that there was 110 gold. James then gathered his siblings then started to walking back to there hut.
Chapter 2: Angered Bloodthirsty Buccaneers
Its now sundown. And James was watching the sun, thinking about his father. Sir Henry Morgan. James then heard Marc call out to him " C'mon, James! Liz is starting the fire!". '' Yes, please come! " Jordan tug along. Elizabeth walked over to James. '' Hey, James, what's wrong? " she said. " I don't know.... I've just been thinking about dad. How he's doing.... If he's alive... " James replied. " Yes, i do too. " she said. James and Elizabeth were walking back to the hut. Jordan and Marc were already starting to fall asleep. James and Elizabeth were then up about for two hours until Elizabeth broke the silence by saying " Im going to go to sleep, how about you.". " Yes.... I just don't have a good feeling about this.. " James said while Elizabeth was putting out the fire. James and Elizabeth then started to fall asleep. There was suddenly a ringing of a ship porting at the nearby dock on Port Royal. None of the siblings have woken up from the loud bell. The boat docked and the crew started heading to the little hut. They got to the hut then grabbed Jordan and dashed.

In the morning, Elizabeth woke up first. She looked at Marc, then to were Jordan had fallen asleep that night. He wasn't there. She then saw a note and read aloud softly. " Hello Ironstack Family,
You have killed our captain. You may face the wrath by finding your beloved sibling before its too late.
Love,
Captain Davy's Crew"
Elizabeth started screaming and crying until James and Marc woke up and calmed her down. James read the letter and said, " With our 150 coins, we will, buy a boat! "

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Pretty good - the only things I can't help but notice are slight errors. "...before his dad had left.There..." You should make sure you space out sentences.

~CM

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Thanks for helpin' mate! Chapter one almost up for the first one!

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first chapter up for the first book.

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Chapter 2 almost up

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Chapter 2 up!

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no chapter 3 today... sorry