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George The Noob and the Quest for the Lost Burrito
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12-12-2010, 03:25 AM
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Davy, it's kinda only me anyways :P
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12-12-2010, 03:40 AM
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Okay, so I'm writing the next chapter tonight and it'll be out by at least late tomorrow k?
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12-12-2010, 04:07 AM
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Sure, I'll be ready!
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12-13-2010, 05:43 AM
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Yayz! teh chawpturs iz here!
 Teh Search Continues With kraken puke all over the ship, the crew of 5 continued their search for the burrito. "Well mates, it's been a hell of a week for us all!" Announced Anton. "We've started our journey, and defeated the kraken! I think. ANYWHO, we now have enough rum to fill our bellies for years! That is unless Brandy drinks it all." "I'm already *hic* on it captain *hic* ladybug dude!" Brandy replied Chugging down gallons of it in a minute. "That has got to be the most horrifying 'creature' I've ever seen!" Britney screamed. "Whoz? Teh kraken and stufz?" George responded absent-mindedly. "George, I'm sure he meant Brandy." Banana said, creating an awkward moment. "Wellz, like meh ladybugz dood friend thingy mabober said, we haz had a rly long week n stuf!" "Ladybug dude friend? Should I be offended?" Anton questioned. "LAND *hic* AHEAD!" Brandy screamed. Everyone ran to the front of the Barnacle Brig and stared out into the open ocean. Sure enough, there was a fairly sized island out in the water. On top, there looked to be a fort sitting there. "Grab you weapons mates! This looks to be a fine area to keep a deadly burrito! We just might find it!" Anton ordered. "Wat would teh navy doods want wit a burritoz?" "I've got no clue, but there looks to be thousands of them on that island. They have got to be guarding something important." "Can this craptastic ship move any slower?!?" Britney whined staring up at the sails. "Yez " George said before suddenly slowing the boat down. Britney sighed and looked out over the ocean. He started walking over to the edge of the ship, but slipped on the kraken puke and slammed his head on the deck."WILL SOMEONE CLEAN UP THIS DAMN MESS!" He cried angrily. ":O geez Briney, u haz problem with howz i keepz meh shipz?" George asked him. "Yes! And I have a billion problems with you!" He walked up to George, bumping his chest against his own, asking for a fight. George's eyes got wide. He was about to throw his noobish punch, but Banana intervened. "Whoa, George, calm down" She said grabbing his wrist and putting it back at his side. "And Britney, what's your problem with George?" "AGH!" Briney yelled grabbing his mullet style hair and pulling it out. He walked away screaming like a maniac. "Yayz, teh Britneyz iz bye bye for a whilez " The ship continued on for several more hours before finally docking. They all stepped out onto the stone path leading up to large wooden doors. "Well mates, I believe this is the island known as Kingshead." Anton informed them. They all said 'OOH! AAH!" All except Britney who was still going insane. I've got a feeling he's mentally unstable. As they walked up the path and threw open the doors, they knew it was going to be a LONG search. Well there's your next chapter Sorry about it being really short, I have a lot to do and couldn't really think yesterday or today. I promise the next chapter I write will be much longer. ANYWAY, enjoy
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#5
12-13-2010, 05:54 AM
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LOLOLOLOLOLOL That was short but hilarious. I love how Britney is mentally unstable. This story is so epic...
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#7
12-14-2010, 01:49 AM
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Great story! Might not be to long, but worth the wait.
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#8
12-14-2010, 02:47 AM
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#9
12-14-2010, 04:52 AM
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Hehe, it's great to know you guys like it even though I think I could do better ._. ANYWHO, thanks for all the nice comments and such. I'll try and get the next chapter out by winter break
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#10
12-14-2010, 05:38 AM
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Rofl Jack.... xD
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#11
12-14-2010, 07:21 AM
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Hey, I haz plenty of free time, I'd love to write a chapter for this if you guy would like =D
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#12
12-14-2010, 07:32 AM
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I'd love to see you write a chapter! But first why don't you shoot me a PM giving me an example of writing like a noob :P You can just make whatever up, and then we can see about going forward with it
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#13
12-14-2010, 07:35 AM
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Yeah, I usually write drama/thriller, so this should be a walk in the park. I'll write it tomorrow when I have access to my computer.
-Jak ta Newblez |
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#14
12-14-2010, 07:39 AM
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kk, make sure you PM it to me before you post it just in case there are somethings that need tweaking
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#15
12-14-2010, 07:41 AM
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Sweetsville. I will do so.
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