Continuing Story

[Captain Jason]

I Decided to make a short story on my pirate Jason and his fake crew's trip to raven cove and what they find. Dont wanna give it away
The Trip To Ravens Cove

Chapter 1:"All hands on deck! Looks like we've got EITC on portside!" Shouted Captain Jason. They would have to go off course on the way to Ravens Cove but they had already been spotted. Cannonfire. Wood splinters flew everywhere. "FIRE!" Screamed Bart, the first mate. More cannonfire, this time from the Wicked Witch, Jason's war frigate. The Eitc's half crew was no match for the pirates, it was a short battle and they had taken little damage. "Everyone, Repair! We're lucky to be alive, they weren't expecting too much of a fight! We must be getting close to Ravens Cove, EITC aren't usually out here, it must have been an old ship from a fleet that was still on it's way!" Captain Jason Ordered. They had been sailing for days after setting off from Padres Del Fuego for Ravens Cove and everything had gone as planned, but all of that was about to change...

[Captain Jason]

Here it is!The highly unanticipated by all my nonexistent fans sequel to chapter one in my new and only series!

Chapter 2: "Looks like a storms coming from the west," Said Captain Jason to Bart." "Maybe we should port at the nearest island and make camp, we're running low on food too," Bart responded. Dog, who had heard there conversaition, grabbed the wheel and said "I saw a small island with running water and live animals earlier, we may have to back track, but anything to avoid that storm." It took them only about five minutes to spot the island, the decided to call it isle safety. they judged it was about 20 minutes away, traveling at full speed, just fast enought to beat the storm. They reached the island and realized that there was a small dock, it must have been a deserted settlement from a long time ago, although they found no signs of life besides crabs. "Captain! There seems to be some kind of cave!" Shouted a crew member. "Bart, take half the crew and gather some meat and wood for a fire and shelter, I'll take the rest of the crew and explore the cave for water and any surivors."

[Captain Jason]

since nobody actually reads this im giving up on this story, someone else can take over, unless i get a bunch of replies this story is over.

[Pirate Guy]

eh its ok maybe more detail

[Captain Del]

You need to meat up your story a bit. Give more detail to the surroundings, the characters in the story, etc. etc. That should draw in more readers

[angel 4ever]

ya its good just a little more meat mate maybe u lose some of ur crew did they get lost?? did they go to ravens cove with out u?? is the cave full of dead pirates!? that kinda thing mate