The Story of my Pirate

[Johnny Storm]

This is the story of my pirate Tom Wildeagle:

As a child Tom lived on Port Royal, was poor and had great dreams to one day join the royal navy. The years passed and in his early 20's Tom became a knight for the royal navy and has become very skilled in battle. He was in love with a buetiful woman and was soon to be married to her, sadly this would never come to be, becuase of Jolly Roger. Jolly and his armada of skeletons raided the island and in the chaos some grenades went off, trapping the buetiful woman in a building. Tom tried to get her out but could not, he then told his fellow navy gaurds that he need help to help the woman but they refused becuase they wanted to instead guard the goveners mansion to make sure it would be safe. The building collapsed and the buetiful woman did not survive. At that moment Tom promised that he would have revenge on the royal navy and jolly roger for what had happened. He then left the royal navy and became a pirate. Tom soon became a very skilled pirate who many consider to be pirate lord of port royal. Still very young and somewhat not responsible Tom has become one of the best pirates in the Caribbean. He has chosen the role as neither hero or villain but instead has become a rebel.

So there is the story of my pirate, do you think it is good?

[swordshot]

good.Spelled some stuff wrong though